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Mysterious Island (4)

I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 29/12/2014, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words.

The link below takes you to Part three


Mysterious Island (4)

Image provided and credited by Monday’s Finish the Story


by John Yeo


The house of Don Francisco sat in a remote part of the desert.
Very luxurious and secure, Marg knew of the connection between the Brigadier and the Don, she had visited before with the team. She sat stunned as the express letter was thrust into her hands and the courier melted away into the crowd. The summons came out of the blue, where to meet the helicopter that soon whisked her away to Morocco, for a private emergency conference with the two men. Security was at a very high level and men with guns and viscous looking dogs were everywhere.
Marg was feted and the proposition was outlined. Marg was ordered to return to the mysterious island and undergo special training in infiltration methods. We need you to get information and to join some special forces to bring down our rival business associates. Marg looked askance. “Do I have a choice?” The Brigadier smiled knowingly.
Suddenly there was a huge explosion outside~

149 words ~ (to be continued)

The link below takes you to Part three




Copyright © Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved.

10 thoughts on “Mysterious Island (4)

  1. You keep wanting me to read more! I love it! Thank you again for participating! Stay tuned for next week’s challenge! I cannot see where you will take this! Happy new year! Be well! ^..^

  2. It sounds like this mysterious organisation Marg has gotten caught up in has outposts across the world. I wonder what that mysterious explosion was… roll on Part 5!

  3. Pingback: Mysterious Island (5) | johnandmargaret1607

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