I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 09/03/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words.

The link below takes you to Part Thirteen


Flying Saucers ~

© Image provided by Barbara Beacham ,

“On March 9th, 2015, three objects were reportedly seen in the skies over the Borracho Todos los Tiempos Vineyards.”

Angelo had visited five vineyards where the rioja flowed freely.

He ran as fast as he could along the Rue de Tropicana, shouting. “Invasion, the aliens are here! I will save the world!” Firing a pistol wildly into the sky, as passers by ducked for cover.

“Can you see the saucers in the sky we are under attack!”

Angelo was arrested for being drunk and disorderly, he awoke in a Parisian cell in a drunken stupor, memory began to return as he thought he had been abducted and the Gendarmes were aliens.

Marg arrived with a high powered solicitor and bailed him out. The Brigadier was livid and then keen to get the operation moving to flush the villainous Dickus out of his gambling emporium. Marg and Bella’s teams began to enter the casino separately and mingle with the gamblers. A body suddenly crashed through a plate glass window …….

(150 words)

To be continued…………..

The link below takes you to Part Thirteen




Copyright © Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved

19 thoughts on “MYSTERIOUS ISLAND (14)

  1. That Angelo! What was he thinking? 🙂 Loved the continuation John! Got me thinking with your last line, what I can work into the challenge for next week! Thanks for participating and be well… ^..^

    • Many thanks Babs ~ Another inspired prompt ~ I enjoyed looking up the original Spanish translation on the wonderful Google translate ~ Very interesting tie to the picture ~ I’m glad you enoyed this 🙂

    • Thanks Millie ~ Angelo is a wild card ~ Obviously suffers powerful hallucinations and exhibits wild reactions under the influence of alcohol ~ Clearly psychotic, hence he works for a dodgy financial organisation. Thanks again for your great comment.

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