This is the latest Picture it and Write prompt from Ermilia’s blog
As usual the image is supplied and credited by Ermilia
https://ermiliablog.wordpress.com/2015/03/15/__picture-it-write-103/
WEIGHTLESS
by John Yeo
He found himself
As light as a feather
Floating high,
As high as the clouds
That seemed to support him.
~
He was in a state
Of pure weightlessness,
The gasses in the atmosphere
As soft as billowing silk
Holding him up.
~
Images floated through his mind.
The birds flying high
Seemed to penetrate his thought.
Drifting weightless,
He thrilled with total exhilaration.
~
He knew when in space
The body is weightless.
The initial shock quickly passed
When he realised he was dressed
For the office.
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An alien sound shattered the
Silence on top of the clouds.
“Wake up John!”
The dream picture shattered
Into a million shards.
Copyright © Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved
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Wake up John, time for work! Lovely poem 🙂
Good Morning ladyleemanila ~ I’m happy you liked this ~ Thanks for your lovely response ~ 🙂
That was lovely John, really nice imagery. I felt like I was in a relaxing meditation! 🙂
Thanks tn ~ I had trouble to relate to this image.~ Glad you enjoyed the result 🙂
You did a great job with it 🙂
Great poem….good imagination.
Thanks for your inspiring comment 007, my friend 🙂
Oooh, I like the imagery of the vision shattering like glass. Powerful ending. Thanks for joining in again, John!
– Ermisenda
Thanks for the nice response Ermisenda ~ Glad you enjoyed this 🙂