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MYSTERIOUS ISLAND (24)

I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 18/05/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words.

The link below takes you to Part Twenty-Three

https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/05/11/mysterious-island-23/

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© 2015, Barbara W Beacham

Finish the story begins with:

The crew of the Angel Flame received orders to head out.”

 The submarine slid into the water fully loaded with provisions and the required arms and explosives. The Brigadier had ordered an assault on a huge armoured luxury yacht owned by Dr Dickus’s billionaire brother Maxwell, moored within striking distance of the island.
 Maxwell Dickus was a very shady character, it was rumoured, he had amassed his fortune buying and selling arms to supply some very impoverished African States.
 Marg had left Bella with Don Fernando to be cared for by her relatives, the wounds were superficial and would soon heal with time and care. Marg was to remain on the mysterious island, and after a debriefing would enjoy a well-earned rest.
During this intensive interview, the Brigadier hinted there was a huge operation imminent and Marg’s recent experience and the loyalty she had demonstrated would be well rewarded. Then came the awful news, the submarine was reported sunk and lost…….

(150 words)

To be continued

The link below takes you to Part Twenty-Three

https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/05/11/mysterious-island-23/

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https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/

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18 thoughts on “MYSTERIOUS ISLAND (24)

  1. Oh no! First I thought that it’s a good job Marg wasn’t on board, but if she had been, she’s so resourceful I’m sure she would have found a way to save it. In light of these events, Marg may have to wait a bit longer for her well-earned rest!

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