I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 24/08/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words, not including the given opening sentence.
The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Seven
https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/08/18/mysterious-island-37/
Photo taken of an old photo in 2014 – © Barbara W. Beacham
“The family had no idea that little Luigi would grow up to be…”
Public enemy No 1 in his home country. The baby in his family, he had been brought up with everyone making a glorious fuss of him. In his schooldays he was cold-bloodedly cruel, he became feared and hated by his peers as he was reviled for his violent behaviour. He was hunted relentlessly by the authorities to answer charges of many murders and unexplained deaths. Now a shadowy figure he lived in the middle of the Brazilian jungle.
Dr Ferdinand Dickus and his brother Maxwell were hand in glove with this villain in the production and distribution of designer drugs, a hugely profitable business.
It was feared any survivors of the crashed helicopter were now certainly dead.
Marg was in conference with the Brigadier following the death of Maxwell Dickus, who was assassinated in the middle of the night by an infiltrator. The drone had revealed mysterious tracks leading ………
(150 WORDS)
To be continued…….
The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Seven
https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/08/18/mysterious-island-37/
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Good episode, John. What a villain! I hope all goes well for the team. We’ll be waiting for the next episode. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks Suzanne ~ Luigi is another ingredient in the melting pot ~ I am glad you are enjoying this. 🙂
Now Luigi enters the mix – Marg and co will soon be outnumbered. I’m still worried about the helicopter crash victims – things are looking bleaker for them. Good continuation!
What an interesting addition Ali ~ Sadly I lost one of the Dickus clan this week. Coldly assassinated. This Luigi could be trouble. Thanks for reading this and for your always interesting commenting.
Another great story
Thanks Donna ~ The plot twists and bends around Bab’s excellent prompts ~ 🙂
That Luigi sounds like one bad guy! Hopefully they will catch him and put him away before he does anymore damage. Great story John!
I am thinking this too Joy ~ Thanks for your always supportive comments.
wow a lot of characters and plot for so few words. 🙂
Enjoy the storyline Veronica ~ Thanks for your great comment. 🙂
Great description of Luigi…. his evil palpable! Wonderful episode… cant wait for more!!!!
Thanks CQ ~ As always it is really nice to get a good response from you. The plot gets more murky as the weeks go by! 🙂
Good one John.
Thanks Chioma ~ I’m glad you enjoyed this ~ 🙂
A good installment, John. 🙂 Luigi sounds like an interesting new villain.
Thanks again Louise ~ A very interesting addition to the mixture indeed. I can have some flights of thought with him in the mix. 🙂
To where? Suspenseful yet again John! Loving your entire story! Thanks for sticking with me and the challenge and you be well… ^..^
Thanks again to you Babs my friend. ~ You have provided all these brilliant prompts that keep the whole story flowing. ~ I am glad you are better. ~ Have a great weekend! 🙂
You as well John! Hugs to Margaret!
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