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MYSTERIOUS ISLAND (40)

I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 07/09/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words, not including the given opening sentence.

The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Nine

https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/09/01/mysterious-island-39/

MI 40

© 2015, Marcy B. Ayanian

Finish the story begins with:

“As her mount shifted uneasily under her, she grasped the brim of her old felt Stetson, gazed upwards and remembered Jean Pierre.”

  Lucienne missed Jean Pierre, he had been fun when she visited Paris. She mourned the day he had left for Brazil, recruited by a mysterious organisation, Jean Pierre seduced with a large sum of money had promised to return and marry her when the work was finished.
Jean Pierre had served for three years in the rough tough French Foreign Legion, then recruited by the Brigadier’s organisation when he was discharged. Assigned to Marg’s team, he was present when the booby-trapped door exploded, he was thrown backwards by the force of the explosion and lying prone, blood gushing from a wound. Marg called for medical help as Don Fernando and and his team emptied the contents of the strongroom while the Little Bird helicopter lifted the badly injured Jean Pierre to safety.
The hidden cache of cash and precious metals was removed as a huge blast finally destroyed the complex.

(150 Words)

To be continued.

Copyright (c) Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved.

The link below takes you to Part Thirty-Nine

https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/09/01/mysterious-island-39/

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https://mondaysfinishthestory.wordpress.com/

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