I am taking part in Mondays Finish the Story 28/09/2015, which is a challenge that provides a photo prompt and the opening sentence to your story. The rules indicate that the story you come up with must be between 100-150 words, not including the given opening sentence.
The link below takes you to Part Forty-Two
https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/09/22/mysterious-island-42/
Finish the story begins with:
“The A&B Building was made entirely from driftwood.”
“Can you believe that?” Delphine laughed pointing to the facade. “Just chunks of washed-up wood!”
“Hey, look at that date! 1899, I must get a shot of the front, to e-mail home.”
Angelo and Delphine were meeting a local businessman in front of this historic building to hire a helicopter and ask for help with local information.
After several attacks on members of the Brigadiers organisation, Angelo and Delphine were ordered to Skagway in Alaska.
A tipoff from Brazil revealed that Dr Dickus had returned to this part of the world and was in the process of recruiting mercenaries to attack the Brigadier’s fortress on the Mysterious Island and attempt to recover the lost bullion.
Luigi was building another military-style force in Brazil, little realising he was was under observation.
Marg was called by Don Fernando. “Please, I need to see you urgently, Bella needs your help!” ……..
(150 WORDS)
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The link below takes you to Part Forty-Two
https://johnandmargaret1607.wordpress.com/2015/09/22/mysterious-island-42/
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One thing about their job – they sure get to travel! I hope Bella’s okay.
They say travel broadens the mind Ali ~ Good to hear from you as always ~ I am intrigued about Bella as well. 🙂
Hi John, great piece, it has mystery and intrigue, leaving me wanting to read more. Best wishes, kathie
Thanks Kathie this is ongoing ~ Watch this space! 🙂
Excellent!
I love this ongoing story😀
Thank you Shivangi ~ Thanks for reading and responding to this post 🙂
Need I say it again? I will just have to wait until next week then –huh? 🙂 Be well John! ^..^
Thanks again Babs to your wonderful prompts and the ongoing support ~ Take care. 🙂
Be well John!
Very nice story.. I love this.. 🙂
Thanks ~ I’m glad you enjoyed reading this 🙂
A lot of action going on. Good use of the prompt, John. 🙂 — Suzanne
Thanks for your great response Suzanne ~ Nice to hear from you again 🙂
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