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Inspiration Monday ~ inmonsterbadge1



by John Yeo

  Miriam gracefully swept into the world, to a fanfare of fantastic, futuristic, flashbulb popping, publicity, at the end of the twenty-first century.  When I say swept, this is a deliberate reference to the advanced state of healthcare and attention she had received, during her long sojourn, within her Mother’s womb.

  A celebrity before she was born, Miriam was a miracle child. The daughter of two successful superstars, of worldwide fame and notoriety, who had given up on the idea of children, Miriam would never lack for anything. During a happy contented childhood, spent mainly enjoying professional, hired, loving care and attention, with private tutors to provide her education, Miriam grew into a beautiful woman, with a unique personality.

 When she entered University, everything was done behind the scenes, to smooth her way, and ensure her safe progress.
 An inspired, well educated, self-assured young woman emerged, and announced to her stunned parents.
      “I am going to Africa, to help to relieve the people suffering from the curse of Ebola, by working as an auxiliary nurse. I have accepted a job with a private red-cross organisation.”

   There was uproar in the family, her Father was angry and refused to speak to her, then left to languish, liquidly, in his gentleman’s club, in town. Her Mother, in tears, called for her Psychologist, to transfer her despair, instantly on the consulting couch.

 Miriam flew to Africa to begin working as an auxiliary nurse.

  One month later a letter arrived addressed to Miriam’s parents. Father opened the envelope to reveal a cheque made out in the name of his daughter, for the princely sum of £100.00.

 His chest heaved, as he suppressed a tear, and with a smile of proud admiration, he read these few words, that were written on the reverse of the cheque, out loud to his wife.

     “Here is my very first Paycheck. I am, and I always will be your loving daughter. Miriam”

Copyright (c) Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved.


Image (c) John and Margaret

3 thoughts on “A prompt response for “INSPIRATION MONDAY:” ~ BABY’S FIRST PAYCHECK

  1. I really like this story. She grew up to be a very independent person despite all the things taken care of for her during her life. She got her education and put it to good use and was grateful for all her blessings. Her wanting to share her knowledge and love to those in great need tells a lot about the person she became. We need more people like her!

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