Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers ~ Writing challenge.
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The goal is to write a story between 100-150 words (give or take 25 words) based on the provided photo.
This week’s photo prompt is provided by Etol Bagam.
RED UMBRELLA
by John Yeo
“Take your umbrella Mum! Rain is forecast. Take the main road, the shortcut is dangerous, the path takes you through the enchanted woods.” cautioned Arabella.
“OK! Dear!”
‘I don’t believe in any of that,’ she thought.
Bessie was bravely enjoying her walk along the shortcut: suddenly a wolf howled, Merlin the magician appeared with a magic wand and a long white beard . The wolf was trotting along by Merlin on the other side of the fence.
“Abracadabra, you should be dead! You’ve only been been saved because you are carrying red!” The magical Merlin wickedly said.
“Oh dear me!” replied Bessie. “Boo-Hoo, I know you! You’re in my imagination!”
There was a jingle of bells on the other side behind the magical fence?
A figure in red rode by on a sled that glided over the mud.
“Merry Christmas! You are not dead because you are carrying red. Follow me and you will be free from Merlin’s mighty dread.”
The rain stopped and she shut her red umbrella. Bessie was never seen again.
(174 WORDS)
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Nice mix. 🙂
Thanks YS! I’m glad you enjoyed this ~ Puts me in mind of a pantomime.~ HAPPY NEW YEAR! 🙂
Good flash 🙂
Thanks ~ Lovely comment, glad to hear from you 🙂
Love this one! Poor Bessie has been misled by sled and red! 🙂
Probably away with the fairies, somewhere safe Jessie ~ Happy New Year! Next week 🙂
Great story! She became lost in her imagination! Enjoyed this story John. 🙂
Thanks PJ, I’m glad you enjoyed this 🙂
I did and I hope you and Margaret have had a nice holiday.
Thanks PJ ~ You too enjoy your holiday and keep your wonderful prompts coming in 2016 🙂
Thanks John and I certainly intend to! 😀
I hope she is somewhere having fun 🙂
I’ m sure she is Jacqueline ~ Hope you are having a great holiday 🙂
Nice story.