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ELEVEN HOURS

MONDAY 12th OCTOBER 2020

This is a response to a Flash Fiction prompt from ‘Putting My Feet In the Dirt’, Writing Prompts hosted by ‘M’.
Which can be found by following the link below..

PROMPT ~ Eleven Hours

ELEVEN HOURS

by John Yeo

The feeling came through like a bolt from the blue

The first hour passed quickly, the idea was exciting 

My mind resonated with love through and through.

~

During the second hour I decided to approach you

I hesitated for the third hour, your love was inviting

The feeling came through like a bolt from the blue.

~

The long fourth hour my feelings hard to construe 

As the fifth hour arrived and left like lightning 

My mind resonated with love through and through.

~

Then came the sixth hour with my thoughts askew

Melding into the seventh the idea so enticing

The feeling came through like a bolt from the blue.

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Hour eight I stopped thinking yet the time still flew

On the ninth hour with the fires of my feelings ignited

My mind resonated with love through and through.

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Hour ten and my confidence just grew and grew

At the eleventh hour I knelt down and asked you

Your reply came through like a bolt from the blue

My feelings resonated with love through and through.

© Written by John Yeo ~ All rights reserved

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